Alien Runaway Mate A Novel SciFi Paranormal Alien Romance eBook April Osirus
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After her father’s sudden death, Sarah Peyton is sold off as a debtor’s slave to a settlement on Europa. After a year of suffering and abuse, she finally manages to grab a chance at escape.
Sneaking onto a cargo ship, she flies off Europa and hopefully towards a new future. Only to find out the ship is bound for the brutal warrior planet of Vistra, full of seven foot warriors, muscular and defined for battle.
Has she just traded one hell for another?
Vitstran warrior Brax is determined to make sure that isn’t the case. He is ready to protect her with his body and name but can he protect her from his heart—which has already claimed her as his forever mate?
**This novel is based off of the short story of the same title.
Alien Runaway Mate A Novel SciFi Paranormal Alien Romance eBook April Osirus
I really wanted to like this book but there were too many flaws. The narration drove me crazy, switching from first person to second person all the time. One could get whiplash from all the changes. There were typos as well. The ending was bizarre. I don't know if the author got tired of the story and just wanted to end it or what but it didn't make sense. Here the woman was just attacked and roughed up and her savior, the man that loves her, starts feeling her up and then all of the sudden they are having sex. I don't get it. What hero does that? What man in love would do that to his woman right after she had been attacked? There were parts of the story that were good but the ending just left me with a question mark over the whole thing.Product details
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Alien Runaway Mate A Novel SciFi Paranormal Alien Romance eBook April Osirus Reviews
Love reading about the big guys and their mates! Can't wait to read more! Thank you for introducing me to them!
I loved it! I could not put it down till I finished it. It was awesome and sweet with a bit of naughty. It needed a bit more editing but it was still awesome. Can’t wait to read more by this author! ^_^
I hate when a good story is interrupted by poor grammar. Have someone you trust proofread before you sell your stories. You just may get better interest and sales. Better yet, hold a contest for a few of your fans to get an ARC. Ask them to give you feedback and help with the grammatical edits. I'd be glad to purchase another ebook from this author; but if simple word errors such as "you're" versus "your" continues, I'll have to pass on future stories.
This book was a good story to read. I would definitely recommend this book to everyone to read, even my family.
Good story, but needs editing. I would be happy to be a Beta reader for this author as the stories are good, but the editing needs help. The jumping around with 1st person and 3rd person in the same sentence is rather annoying, but the story is good.
Several times the writer switched between first person and third person causing me to have to go back and reread a page to make sense out of it. There were occasions where words were switched around and put in the wrong order in a sentence so that the sentence made no sense in the way it was written.
I really like the story as well as the characters. The build was gradual and easy to believe and the plot well done.
The only things that I think would have been better were is there were a few more secondary characters or at least the fleshing out of the ones that were there. There was the housekeeper, the uncle, the friend at the Herod work etc. that could have made the story "more".
Also the switching from first person to third person doesn't usually bug me so much, however, when it is in the same paragraph and even the same sentence I have a problem. It was a little jarring to say the least.
Overall I would read another book by this author and am hoping that there is anothe coming soon!
Thank you for the escape into your world.
I really wanted to like this book but there were too many flaws. The narration drove me crazy, switching from first person to second person all the time. One could get whiplash from all the changes. There were typos as well. The ending was bizarre. I don't know if the author got tired of the story and just wanted to end it or what but it didn't make sense. Here the woman was just attacked and roughed up and her savior, the man that loves her, starts feeling her up and then all of the sudden they are having sex. I don't get it. What hero does that? What man in love would do that to his woman right after she had been attacked? There were parts of the story that were good but the ending just left me with a question mark over the whole thing.
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